Storyline ideas

Here are my ideas for my short films storyline:


Thomas murders someone

Pro: 
  • Raises awareness of people with mental health problems

Con: 
  • I don't want to portray mental health problems in a negative way.

Helps rehabilitate someone out of prison.

Pro:
  • Positive story will audience will enjoy - upbeat feelings.

Con:
  • Difficult to make the story believable

Witnesses a teen being abused by his/her parent, flashes back to his abuse and tries to help the teen

Pro:

  • Helps raise awareness of child abuse and the repercussions of child abuse
Con:
  • Don't want to portray this storyline in the wrong way.

Evicted from his house, can't keep up with the bills - becomes homeless.

Pro:
  • Raises awareness for the problems of homelessness.

Con:
  • Keeping it looking 'realistic' - would have to do research such as watching 'Can't Pay? We'll Take It Away'


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